Here are the revised sentences that my group and I had to do.
1. The melting moms ad by the "Infect Truth," anti-smoking campaign, shows mothers who are pregnant smoke while they are pregnant.
2. You might ask, "Is this ad for makeup, cars, or a tanning salon?"
3. There are many things on this great Amercian highway. I would like to focus on one inparticular, such as the south of the border.
4. The encore T.C. is a very innovative gun that is mostly advertised on the outdoor channel 407.
5. In thier advertisement, Busch isn't trying to sell beer. They ar instead supporting the United States soldiers and letting their customers and the world know that.
6. This ad is trying to say women can do anything, such as putting on makeup while driving.
Patrick S., Nicole M.
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